
There is a bridge
in my town
The only bridge
in my town
It travels fast
Faster than
anything I know
And,Β goes
deep in
the sky
At this rate
I will never be
where it wants
to take me
There is a bridge
in my town
The only bridge
in my town
It travels fast
Faster than
anything I know
And,Β goes
deep in
the sky
At this rate
I will never be
where it wants
to take me
I love the form of this one, not to mention the words themselves. Nice job!
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Thank you! It made me happy that you liked it! π
Hope you are doing well!
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My pleasure! I am doing well, thanks! Hope you are, too. π
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very cool, mystery, beauty, perfect symbol for a bridge.
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Thank you! I agree bridges are mysterious pieces of architecture!
I’m glad you liked it, Phil. Have a nice day! π
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Very interesting this one. I’m wondering where this bridge wants to take you.
π
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Ehehe, thank you Staci! I am wondering the same. π
How are you?
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Hehehe. You’re wondering the same? Oh no. I think it’s going way too fast then eh π
I’m doing well, thanks. A little anxious because I’ve got a big move coming up and some drastic changes happening in my life, but all is well. I see change as a good thing. It can just be a little uncomfortable at first.
Hope you’re doing well.
π
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Oh that’s great, I’m sure you’ll be just fine once you settle in the new place. π
I’m doing good these past few days. *fingers crossed*
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Yeah!
β€ rootin' for ya.
π
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π β€
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definitely a bridge over troubled waters π and is that another NKA classic?
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Thanks, C!
And NO that’s from an anime as in its a sketch.
Don’t over-pressurise NKA okay? XD
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hehehehehe π
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Love the poem and the title in particular. Obscured by light? Which light? you or some other light? I am perceiving it to be you. It sits here beautifully as you bedim others with your shine. You will never be where this bridge wants to take you but………….wherever you are, you will always be yourself……just a wonderful LIGHT.
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Hehe, I KNEW it! I knew you’d be able to figure it out..yes, it was supposed to be wordplay of some sort, at least it worked for you! β€
Aw, 'wonderful Light' – thanks so much, R! When you're not on my blog even for a day I get so anxious!! Where we you? Pani Puri in London? XD
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Bingo! Happy that I cracked the code and lived upto your expectations. Pleasure is mine for I’m the winner.He he :).
I was busy shifting to new flat. Not yet done. Still a week to go. No going out…………it is so shivery weather here. So do not be anxious in my absence on your blog………………i will show up sooner or later.
Stay cool! π
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Ah, moving blues! I understand. π
Hehe, yep don’t worry, I know you will always show up! We are cool! π
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Yes, we are super cool. R&D Researching sadness and Developing happiness. Cheers!
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Very well done! I love the sense of otherness and time and space seeming to dissolve at the end…
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Thanks for the kind and sincere words, J. It’s always great to hear from you and I’m glad you liked it. π
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You deserve the kudos!
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