Air saturated with a cold flame
Warmth fed to the stoic snow
His back aches with happiness
Windows glitter by mercurial dark
A fickle line arches to unite it all
It sure will! I feel quite optimistic about it. Thanks, Frederic! Hope you are doing good. Take care. 🙂 ♥ –> how do you even make this?! Haha, I can always copy, though 😀
Wow! It is such a supernal peace reading this cute poem. Your imagination has soared too high to catch such wonderful contrast. Altogether. you have limned it superbly. Keep going……..Love.
My pleasure and thanks a lot for the hugs and cookies. Glad to know about your unique habits. I concur……….LIGHT cannot be enjoyed without its contrast……the dark counterpart.
Virtual R! towards your right. Lets go for a walk talk walk talk………..:)
mercurial dark… powerful image! hope celestial light will appear! :-)♥
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It sure will! I feel quite optimistic about it. Thanks, Frederic! Hope you are doing good. Take care. 🙂 ♥ –> how do you even make this?! Haha, I can always copy, though 😀
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Great imagery here. Like opposites (cold flame, aches happiness, warmth stoic).
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Thank you, Staci! Yes, it was intended to be so – there is so much paradox in our lives, it makes me happy to see their co-existence. 🙂
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Wonderful images created with your use of contrasts! Well done!
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Thank you for the kind words, Georgette! I’m glad you liked it! 🙂
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you write these short verses like this bird called zitting cisticola sings when the sun yawns 🙂
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Ehehe, I presume that’s a good thing, so thanks C! 😀
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Of course it is D 😀
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Wow! It is such a supernal peace reading this cute poem. Your imagination has soared too high to catch such wonderful contrast. Altogether. you have limned it superbly. Keep going……..Love.
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Thanks, R! I love to find contrasts in everything so much so that it’s pretty much a frustrating habit now. -.-
Lots of hugs and cookies! 🙂
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My pleasure and thanks a lot for the hugs and cookies. Glad to know about your unique habits. I concur……….LIGHT cannot be enjoyed without its contrast……the dark counterpart.
Virtual R! towards your right. Lets go for a walk talk walk talk………..:)
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Whee! Let’s go for a walk talk, then! *tiny virtual D to your left* 😀
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