It rained heavily today
Like it’d erase the tree rings
Like it’d clean the leaf rust
None of that happened
It will one day
I knew what was coming
– Puddled sunshine
So, I decided to talk
to my friends
Because rainy days are
the best to cry
I knew what was coming
– Blissful Hatred
They were happy
One by default
The other in fear
We laughed, and
we laughed
at the past that
now so passionately
toys with us
in memories of the future
that is now our sky
I knew what was coming
– Medicated Silence
I know what’s to come
– Staccato Paths
You’re so wow. Sorry I have nothing else to say this time. Just wow.
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Thank you so much! I’m overwhelmed. I don’t know what else to say either, thank you – your words make my day brighter, my friend.
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Reblogged this on Walkingtomydreams13.
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How a rainy day becomes what we think of it. May your future be a bliss and your present be heaven 🙂
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Yes, everything is what we want it to be! Isn’t that amazing, and so are you! Thank you so much for the reblog and likes, you are an incredible person! Love and hugs! ❤ 🙂
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beautifully epic D 🙂
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Aha! Thank you, C! And YOU use Epic for me, mate! :’)
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Mspahr is right: you’re so wow 🙂 sad, and powerfully beautiful.
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Ah, thanks so much! I still think that the word ‘wow’ is too incredible for me but I will embrace it! Yes!
Have a nice day! 🙂
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This is a profoundly beautiful expression. Hugs, my friend.
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Oh, thank you so much, Georgette! I’m glad you thought so. Hugs for you too, my friend.
I hope you’re doing better now. 🙂
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Interesting way in the way you put your message across.
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Ahaha, I know! Interesting and quite strange. 😀
Thanks, Yoshiko! You’re fabulous! ❤
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You are welcome. Good attempt 🙂
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Amazing and Orphic! The Gif is totally fantastic and refreshing. So beautiful to watch those raindrops sliding in gracility…………as if washing away the pain, mutely. “It would clean the leaf rust”- so deep is this. I wonder if that would ever happen. It is like cleaning the stained and drained past……….showering us afresh in the present. You have constructed it so magically. The best part is “Rainy days are the best to cry”. But very true……….because no one can witness your crying……………and no one can see your tears. Unless, they have tasted your pain. I think………..rain drops and tears are twin concerns. Just love your poem D! It is awesome. Stay shining. 🙂
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Thanks, R! You’ve interpreted the poem so beautifully that I need not say anything anymore. And yes, rainy days are indeed lovely days to cry, everything gets dissolved in it. “rain drops and tears are twin concerns” – wow, what a lovely perspective! I’m super-happy you loved it, my friend! ❤ 🙂
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Pleasure is all mine. Thanks for such allaying poem.
Take care. 🙂
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THIS.IS.BEAUTIFUL!!!
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YOU.ARE.BEAUTIFUL! Thank you, Fatina! Your support is very much appreciated. ❤
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My pleasure 🙂
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Excellent. You reminded me why I love the rain.
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Aw, thank you, Millie! I love the rain, for the same reasons, that is only if I am inside the house. =)
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“Memories of the future that is now our sky”–WOW, I love that.
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Thank you, my friend. I’m really glad you loved it! 🙂
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Indeed I do–it’s a perfect phrase, somehow magical and spiritual both.
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This is deep, my friend. And portrayed poignantly.
🙂
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Thank you, my friend. It is a fresh memory hence the poignancy – details do that, don’t they? 🙂
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They do.
🙂
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I love this…and it seems one of my favorite words has been used many times in the comments…WOW!! There you go…I had to use it again. 🙂 ❤
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Aw, WOWs make me so happy!! Although the word the larger than my abilities, I love you for using it Lorrie! Yay! Thanks so much! ❤ ❤ 🙂
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Such a heartfelt piece… wonderfully written. ❤
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Thank you so much, Aubery! Your presence on my blog always makes me happy.
This poem is taken from personal experiences…you know it.
Hope you are doing well! ❤
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You are truly an incredible individual! and thank you, it is a lovely day, doing great! ❤
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That’s great! 🙂 ❤
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