Night spreads over the eyes
Curtains for ghosts hang empty
Sleep chased away by fireflies
Mind rests heavy on a digital tray
Rain sounds conjured in a leaky pipe
Night spreads over the eyes
Curtains for ghosts hang empty
Sleep chased away by fireflies
Mind rests heavy on a digital tray
Rain sounds conjured in a leaky pipe
What a beautiful picture! And what a wonderful “cinquain”… xxoo
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Thank you! 🙂
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Amazingly written! The image is just magical. I particularly loved the fireflies chasing away the sleep. Just wonderful cute little poem. My eyes are all set on the gif. Love it crazy.
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I know, right? I’ll admit that I wrote it just for the gif, although it in no way justifies its beauty and drifts WAY away with most of the lines but that gif is ethereal! 😀
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So innocently honest are you, D!……………..Love your rawness. You just simply admit everything……………hiding nothing. I will not beat around the bush either. The lines are awesome. If the words are appealing to mind the gif is a visual treat. take care.
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By the way it’s from the Japanese animated movie – Grave of the fireflies – do watch it if you get a chance, it’s even more beautiful than the GIF.
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Awww ………thank you dear. I will definitely watch it and let you know. I am just crazy to watch such wonderful things. Thank you soooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for the info. Stay smiling! 🙂
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No worries! Love and hugs from, D! ❤ ❤
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Thank you. Just wanted to let you know something. Go to your innovation “Unleashed”. Edit the start line. Today is (I) tried. I just read the start. I am not done yet. Go Go
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OH MY! Thanks SO MUCH! DONE! 😀 😀
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Ohhhh, did you have trouble sleeping last night? Too busy watching the fireflies and reading in your WordPress Reader while in bed?
Just kidding. Lovely, my friend.
🙂
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Ahahaha, you may be right, though! XD
Thank you, my friend! ❤
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“Sleep chased away by fireflies” – “cause it’s a bittersweet symphooooony, this liiii(h)iiife” 🙂 lovely D <3, and that'll be the last of my 90s pop culture references…for the day 😀
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THE VERVE! Sorry, but you know it. 😀
Hahaha, if I cannot marry Michael Madsen then it is the flawless voice of Richard Ashcroft – so many options! :’)
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hehehe (mortal kombat voiceover) EXCELLENT! 🙂
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Random Shinigami Black speech – “I KNOW!” XD
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Another lovely image you’ve created for us! 🙂
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Why did i not see this! 😦
I’m sorry! I really hate responding late…argh!
Thank you so very much, Georgette! ❤
You are far too kind, my friend.
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No worries! Hope you have a great weekend! 🙂
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I hope the same for you! 🙂
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Oh I like this one A LOT!!! I love that ghosts have curtains–I didn’t realize they need them! And rain sounds “conjured”–love that. And fireflies are right up on my list with wind chimes and fireworks–wowza-great poem!
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Haha, I have read too much R.L Stine so everything from a sponge to curtains are needed by ghosts! Thank you! Ah, yes fireflies, and so are butterflies – so magical. 🙂
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Hey there,
This is to inform you that you’ve been nominated for an award.!
http://walkingtomydreams13.wordpress.com/2014/10/20/award/
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Thank you, Nishita. That means a lot to me! ❤
I haven't yet done the last one you nominated me for but I have been busy with exams and such. I'll get to it asap! Your appreciation means a lot, my dear friend. Lots of love! ❤
-Light
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You are welcome, Light ❤
How did your exams go?
Your happiness means alot to me, Stay Happy. ❤
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