“Fingers hold pens
And are led into dens
Dens of thoughts blank
Which conjure and evade
Blank sheets and make them their homes”
This is my take, trying to be an old lady even though I’m no where near. This is beautiful.
Oh, that’s beautiful and perfect! Thanks so much for sharing your poetic and thoughtful comment. 🙂
I’m really glad you liked it, and I largely appreciate your presence on my blog!
Hope you’re doing well!
TERRIFIC! Amazingly written. Ahh…i am just re-reading. I am spell bound. “waiting to be served in empty pints of thoughts”- Oh my..such an ingenious mentation. I just donno what else to say. I would just sum up ….important (heartfelt) things are hardest to say. Rest, you work on. Thank you for sharing such a poetic wonder. Love you, Light. 🙂
THANK YOU! I honestly had nothing on my mind today..nothing at all, no thoughts, so I wrote this somehow. I am very glad you liked it, R! And that it leaves you spell-bound – makes me speechless. You’re far too kind! ❤
It's so true what you said – Heartfelt things are the hardest to say – it's like lined inside the head but cannot be expressed, I know that feeling. 🙂
A humongous cloud of love for you, R!
My Pleasure, sweetie! Having nothing, you have written everything………such a skill. Plzzzzzzz teach me this. I have mailed your poetic lines to my cousin. He is a journalist. He instantly fell in love with your lines.
Thanks for your humongous cloud of love….. I am all drenched. Who sieved it?
Okay I am sending equally walloping cloud of love to you. This is rain proof….it will not drain but just warm you up in its cuddle. 🙂
Aww, that’s very humbling. So to write on such random topics all you’ve to do is a little…Math ahahahaha I am just teasing you, R! XD
Oh no..I shall mail you some tea, right now! Yay, I do feel warm, you’re the SWEETEST! ❤
Ahhhaaaaaaaaaaaa no trapping me, D! I am a wind….it is suffocating and otiose attempt to trap me in your words. I know what is in your head and what is in the comment.
Hahaha, it’s so much fun to tease you! I’ve never had a sister to tease and brothers go quite serious as they grow older. Thanks so much, R! Don’t worry I won’t use the M word for now. XD
Much love. ❤
Thats like my D! It is okay………you can keep your M with you but out of my sight. My dad used to ask on my math exam day (deliberately) :Konsa exam hai…And I used to say Algebra….then he used to tease me :Dil Gabra. I used to smile at the rhyme “Algebra- Dil Gabra.
Now, I am ready to take my Math exam every day just to have him besides me but he is no more to tease me. No smiles now. 😦
😦 I don’t even know what to say, R. I cannot imagine how it must have felt like to lose him. Your are very brave, as I always say, and you will stay that way, I know. That’s such a heart-wrenching thought – I am ready to take my Math exam every day just to have him besides me but he is no more to tease me – know that he’s in a much better place and he always watches over you, maybe he is teasing you right now. 🙂
May be he is teasing me right now but am not smiling for sure. He is in a much better place but I am in my worst ever phase. God was unfair. My dad was taken away from me when he was 47. My mom was just 40 then.
FAr away from my dad but not so near to my mom even. 😦
At 47! That must have been devastating for your family. You’re right – it was unfair for you, but maybe something unbelievably good is in-store for you, R. You can always talk to me when you feel lonely.
Fathers are so special, and more so for daughters.
Why not call your mum to live with you in London, as in once you settle there?
I cannot talk my reasons and my mom’s reasons here, dear. Every day I have a new exam to excel……passing is far from it.
What is this D! We are forced to accept who reject us and vice versa. I donno what am I talking about… Lets end this discussion here. I am just running insane. I should think positive. Sorry for all this, Light. Hope u understand. Take care.
Aww, it’s okay. Don’t worry please and take adequate rest. And, don’t be sorry, if you ever want to talk about anything you can always e-mail me – my mail id is there on the profile page.
Take care, R. Love you!
Thank you for such a lovely response! I’m very glad you liked it. Thanks so much for the kindness, my friend, I really really appreciate it! 🙂
Hope you’re doing well! ♥♥
Oh thanks so much! It’s so great that you liked it!
I am humbled by the appreciation, and HL for you too, you totally made my day brighter! ❤
Best wishes for you too, Melanie! 🙂
You are immensely clever. There’s no stopping you!
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Oh my…thanks so much for your generous words, Spahr. I’m humbled. I am extremely glad you thought so! 🙂
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i second that comrade…this is very smartly crafted, D…me loved it 🙂
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Thank you, C. 🙂
I just happen to know a lot of gif making sites so…hahaha XD
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“Fingers hold pens
And are led into dens
Dens of thoughts blank
Which conjure and evade
Blank sheets and make them their homes”
This is my take, trying to be an old lady even though I’m no where near. This is beautiful.
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Oh, that’s beautiful and perfect! Thanks so much for sharing your poetic and thoughtful comment. 🙂
I’m really glad you liked it, and I largely appreciate your presence on my blog!
Hope you’re doing well!
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I am thank you very much. Blessings
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TERRIFIC! Amazingly written. Ahh…i am just re-reading. I am spell bound. “waiting to be served in empty pints of thoughts”- Oh my..such an ingenious mentation. I just donno what else to say. I would just sum up ….important (heartfelt) things are hardest to say. Rest, you work on. Thank you for sharing such a poetic wonder. Love you, Light. 🙂
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THANK YOU! I honestly had nothing on my mind today..nothing at all, no thoughts, so I wrote this somehow. I am very glad you liked it, R! And that it leaves you spell-bound – makes me speechless. You’re far too kind! ❤
It's so true what you said – Heartfelt things are the hardest to say – it's like lined inside the head but cannot be expressed, I know that feeling. 🙂
A humongous cloud of love for you, R!
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My Pleasure, sweetie! Having nothing, you have written everything………such a skill. Plzzzzzzz teach me this. I have mailed your poetic lines to my cousin. He is a journalist. He instantly fell in love with your lines.
Thanks for your humongous cloud of love….. I am all drenched. Who sieved it?
Okay I am sending equally walloping cloud of love to you. This is rain proof….it will not drain but just warm you up in its cuddle. 🙂
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Aww, that’s very humbling. So to write on such random topics all you’ve to do is a little…Math ahahahaha I am just teasing you, R! XD
Oh no..I shall mail you some tea, right now! Yay, I do feel warm, you’re the SWEETEST! ❤
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Choose between me and your M…H. or else I am all done with you. No kidding.
I already had my tea. You enjoy with your erstwhile love.
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OH NO!! Okay I will play Ash Ketchum now – “I CHOOSE YOU!” I choose you, R, of course! 😀
Math is okay but you are a GEM! ^_^
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Ahhhaaaaaaaaaaaa no trapping me, D! I am a wind….it is suffocating and otiose attempt to trap me in your words. I know what is in your head and what is in the comment.
By the way…when are your exams starting?
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Why don’t you trust me! Ahahaha, yes well, I have a little weakness for Math but…it’s not like an addiction, I will always be there for you. 😀
It’s on Sunday – an entrance exam, so not much of a mugging up session needed. Just a bit of MATH practice. XD
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No need to caps that M thing. It is an obvious understanding. I am not a daft. Since it is the M thing….i need not say All the best.
But still……Best of Luck to you.
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Hahaha, it’s so much fun to tease you! I’ve never had a sister to tease and brothers go quite serious as they grow older. Thanks so much, R! Don’t worry I won’t use the M word for now. XD
Much love. ❤
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Thats like my D! It is okay………you can keep your M with you but out of my sight. My dad used to ask on my math exam day (deliberately) :Konsa exam hai…And I used to say Algebra….then he used to tease me :Dil Gabra. I used to smile at the rhyme “Algebra- Dil Gabra.
Now, I am ready to take my Math exam every day just to have him besides me but he is no more to tease me. No smiles now. 😦
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😦 I don’t even know what to say, R. I cannot imagine how it must have felt like to lose him. Your are very brave, as I always say, and you will stay that way, I know. That’s such a heart-wrenching thought – I am ready to take my Math exam every day just to have him besides me but he is no more to tease me – know that he’s in a much better place and he always watches over you, maybe he is teasing you right now. 🙂
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May be he is teasing me right now but am not smiling for sure. He is in a much better place but I am in my worst ever phase. God was unfair. My dad was taken away from me when he was 47. My mom was just 40 then.
FAr away from my dad but not so near to my mom even. 😦
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At 47! That must have been devastating for your family. You’re right – it was unfair for you, but maybe something unbelievably good is in-store for you, R. You can always talk to me when you feel lonely.
Fathers are so special, and more so for daughters.
Why not call your mum to live with you in London, as in once you settle there?
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I cannot talk my reasons and my mom’s reasons here, dear. Every day I have a new exam to excel……passing is far from it.
What is this D! We are forced to accept who reject us and vice versa. I donno what am I talking about… Lets end this discussion here. I am just running insane. I should think positive. Sorry for all this, Light. Hope u understand. Take care.
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Aww, it’s okay. Don’t worry please and take adequate rest. And, don’t be sorry, if you ever want to talk about anything you can always e-mail me – my mail id is there on the profile page.
Take care, R. Love you!
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Thank you. Love u too.
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Very clever and full of excellent imagery. I love the way in which you have set imagination in a more mundane human environment.
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Thank you very much, Chris. I really appreciate your perspective and how it is concurs with mine. I’m extremely glad you liked it!
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only one word:
CONGRATULATIONS………..
I love the presentation, the poem… Beingeternal is right: amazingly written… superb! ♥♥♥
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Thank you for such a lovely response! I’m very glad you liked it. Thanks so much for the kindness, my friend, I really really appreciate it! 🙂
Hope you’re doing well! ♥♥
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Wonderful, and very clever. That’s so cute, as if the keys of the type-writer are stools for fingers.
🙂
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Hehehe, yes indeed it was meant to be so, Staci! I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
The kettle must be on its way so hang in there. 😉
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I’m anxiously waiting. hehehe
🙂
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😀 ❤
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Though not always empty. 🙂 Enjoyed this piece.
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Hopefully, it won’t be as it is today…haha!
I’m very glad you enjoyed it. Thanks! 🙂
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Clever, YES–oh my, brilliantly so!
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Thanks so much for the kind words, P. 🙂
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Simply brilliant; I love it! 🙂
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Thank you very much, my dear friend. I’m very glad you thought so. 🙂
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This is SO INCREDIBLE. ..I don’t know what to say!!! Just superb…awesome…I love it!! 🙂 ❤
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Aw, THANK YOU! I’m extremely pleased you liked it, Lorrie! 😀 ❤
You always make my days lovelier, my friend! ❤
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🙂 Thank you for the warm smile! ❤
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simply and purely MAGNIFIQUE… HL = huge like! ❤ tons of inspiration, my very best and cheers, Mélanie
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Oh thanks so much! It’s so great that you liked it!
I am humbled by the appreciation, and HL for you too, you totally made my day brighter! ❤
Best wishes for you too, Melanie! 🙂
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