I wear a wingless feather
I live in an unclaimed spider web
I belong to a vacant shadow
I walk an abandoned lane
I breathe in chimney smoke
I read broken minds
I fill my stomach with
my leftover fiery strength
I live in a world
which needs me
Because
sometimes I
complete it
Love the way that this poem hints at a force which touches us all, be it silent or loud.
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Thank you very much for the appreciation, Chris. It is exactly what I was trying to depict – we’re touched by everything irrespective of it’s nature. I’m grateful for your precise perception. It’s always great to hear from you!
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This is a very powerful statement and poem!
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Thank you, John! I’m glad you liked it! It’s always so good to hear from you.
Take care!
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Nice imagery in the first 6 lines–especially love “breathe in the chimney smoke”.
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Thank you very much, P. Your presence means a lot to me. I’m glad you liked that particular line.
Hope you’re doing well!
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Very powerful poem. Very nice to meet you. Hugs, Barbara
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Thank you, Barbara. I am glad you found it so!
Always great to hear from you!
Take care!
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Oh yes, yes, yes, sweetie. I love that last part especially. YOU DO COMPLETE IT. Way to be positive, my friend.
🙂
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Thank you very much, Staci! And so do you! You complete the world! ❤
I did need some positive thoughts for myself so why not make it, hahaha. 🙂
Hope you and the kids are doing well!
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We’re great thanks.
🙂 ❤
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stifling made sweet! ❤ (in blaaaaaaaack) 🙂
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Ahahaha that was a fail, mate! XD
Nice try though.
Thanks, C! 🙂
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sigh, alright then
…to the bat cave!
(kicks batman out)
dammit!
(cleans the bat cave)
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Ahaha, oh no, C! Ask Robin to do that for you…come on. XD
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Robin doesn’t exist, D. not since chris o donnell
no sorry, it’s too painful
(locks self in arkham asylum)
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The apocalypse of The Batman franchise…hehe, I am sorry about that Batman. Maybe you should ask Alfred then. XD
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Completed in the world… Lovely poem.
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Thank you, Vik! 🙂
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Have a great weekend.
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You too, my friend! 🙂
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🙂
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Dear,
I thankyou for writing this. This is why I am still alive with their whateverness going on.
In love with your poetry.
I live in a world
which needs me
Because
sometimes I
complete it
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You are very welcome! ❤
I believe that in one way or another we do indeed complete the world, even if one was to disappear untimely the world wouldn't be the same, it's all the Domino effect.
Thank you, Nishita! Your support means a lot! You matter. 🙂
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I matter. And so do you. 🙂
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