The warmth of ash

Flames crackling in light

Gamble on incomplete lives 

Warmth that passes through our flesh 

A well-rehearsed debt

Shadows pinned to our feet

Revolve – from the Sun to this hearth

In static circles

Flustered ash rides on air – in remains


    1. Thank you, my dear friend, I love your Wows! ❤ answer your question it's probably the debt that warmth owes to the air around us – just a thought 🙂
      You too, have a fantastic weekend Lorrie! ❤

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    1. Thank you very much for the kind words, Frederic, and wow ‘burning poem’ – appreciate it a lot! 🙂
      Please have a great weekend, my friend!


    1. Thank you, my dearest. You always inspire me with your words and your presence matters a lot! It really does. I am glad you liked this effort. 🙂
      Have a fab weekend! Stay warm! ❤

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