Flames crackling in light
Gamble on incomplete lives
Warmth that passes through our flesh
A well-rehearsed debt
Shadows pinned to our feet
Revolve – from the Sun to this hearth
In static circles
Flustered ash rides on air – in remains
The warmth of ash
A Blind Bird 
Lovely fire and poem. Thanks. 🙂
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Thank you very much, Katarina! 🙂
Please have a great weekend! ^_^
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Wow! Wow!! “A well rehearsed debt”…what kind of payment would erase it…I wonder? Brilliant….
Thank you …have a super weekend ❤
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Thank you, my dear friend, I love your Wows! ❤
Hmm..to answer your question it's probably the debt that warmth owes to the air around us – just a thought 🙂
You too, have a fantastic weekend Lorrie! ❤
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Wow Wow… Lorrie has written the right comment 🙂 As beautiful as powerful… burning poem! Have a nice week end!
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Thank you very much for the kind words, Frederic, and wow ‘burning poem’ – appreciate it a lot! 🙂
Please have a great weekend, my friend!
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“Warmth that passes through our flesh
A well rehearsed debt”. This really caught me… Deep and somehow, cruel.
Hey, can i make a request? 😅
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Thanks so much, Fatina, I’m glad you liked that part. You’re fabulous! ❤
Sure *wipes sweat* Go ahead! What can I do for you? 🙂
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Lol can you write a poem on ‘fire’ ? For me? Please? 😁😅
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Ah! Sure thing! You can send me the details of what exactly you’re looking for in it at my email id. 🙂
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Yayy… Ermm so whats ur email id? 😅
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Hang on, I have yours so I’ll send you a mail – off to gmail you go come on!
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Lol im off :p
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breathless words! <3-ed it. and I don't mean to alarm you, D but that fire (animatedly gulps) is, like, moving yo,
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Thanks, C! ^_^
Yo mate, it’s supposed to – GIF! hehehe XD
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Strikingly Beautiful…..an amazing poetic flame. Well experienced thoughts, I guess. Love the phrases that are creatively weaved amidst the rattled ash.
Shine Bright!
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Thank you, my dearest. You always inspire me with your words and your presence matters a lot! It really does. I am glad you liked this effort. 🙂
Have a fab weekend! Stay warm! ❤
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My Pleasure, D!
I liked your beautiful effort very much.
Stay Blessed!
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