
The tragedy of an average –
sum of all
only to be split
by the count
of what counts
if it is countable
Like a fractal trying to
fit into a reflection
too small for a snowflake
The tragedy of an average –
sum of all
only to be split
by the count
of what counts
if it is countable
Like a fractal trying to
fit into a reflection
too small for a snowflake
Wow! I feel like this sometimes. Hard to believe it can be put into words! Amazing. ❤ ❤
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🙂 It’s great that we can connect through words more than people manage to in real life. Thank you my dearest Lorrie. ❤ ❤ ❤
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I agree:) Hope all is going really well 🙂 ❤
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There’s a law of averages many are familiar with, yet ignore – I don’t think you fit into the equation with an ability to write (think) like this, yet you still take time to count. This makes you even less average.
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True that, Spahr. Simple laws are mostly forgotten by most and me the same. It makes me happy that you think so about me and my work, it was an absolute compliment. Thank you very much! 🙂
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I like this. It reminds me of my poem below, and this music video:
“Fleeting Bated Breath’s Release”
by Ry Hakari
We are Willows walking every eve into mourning,
silent secret-weepers over hibernating people’s
hearts that only make-believe like trees and leave.
When alone we’re our pillow’s talking in our sleep,
Winters waltzing charmed in each other’s arms
through the other Halcyon’s calming dreams.
Long-distance falling facets of our slow-dances go
mostly unnoticed like the uniqueness of the snow,
our soul flakes melting on our bated breath’s release.
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Thank you very much, Ryan! Wow, yes, I can relate to your poetry, loneliness is bitter yet the only way of life.
Hope you’re doing well! =)
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Light, amazing! Fantastic, love all the mathematical and theoretical components. Ah fractals, my all time favorites!
Pepperanne
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Thank you very much, Pepperanne! Specially for noticing Fractals! They are my favourites too, there’s so much simplicity in it’s complex structure – totally fascinating!
I haven’t been around much and have missed your poems! I’ll get myself updated asap. =)
Even if it’s a bit (a lot?) late wish you a lovely new year, Pepper! ^_^
Much love
Light
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Thank you, please have a wonderful New Year as well, and a great 2015!
Pepperanne ♥
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seriously you have real good poetry…..
you actually scare me… lol
i wish i had that thing in me too but i guess i dont…
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Haha, you’re too kind to think so high of me but there are so many who write a lot more creative poetry than me..and so can you! Believe in yourself and you’ll be just fine! I look forward to reading some poetry by you too! =)
Thank you very much. I appreciate your presence on my blog. ❤
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its not that im thinking high of you but you know…
people usually arent very good at poetry… umm like me.. 🙂
plus your the poet i know of at the moment…
:p
thankyou very much
im glad to have you in my blog too
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