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  1. There’s a law of averages many are familiar with, yet ignore – I don’t think you fit into the equation with an ability to write (think) like this, yet you still take time to count. This makes you even less average.

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    1. True that, Spahr. Simple laws are mostly forgotten by most and me the same. It makes me happy that you think so about me and my work, it was an absolute compliment. Thank you very much! 🙂

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  2. I like this. It reminds me of my poem below, and this music video:

    “Fleeting Bated Breath’s Release”
    by Ry Hakari

    We are Willows walking every eve into mourning,
    silent secret-weepers over hibernating people’s
    hearts that only make-believe like trees and leave.

    When alone we’re our pillow’s talking in our sleep,
    Winters waltzing charmed in each other’s arms
    through the other Halcyon’s calming dreams.

    Long-distance falling facets of our slow-dances go
    mostly unnoticed like the uniqueness of the snow,
    our soul flakes melting on our bated breath’s release.

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    1. Thank you very much, Ryan! Wow, yes, I can relate to your poetry, loneliness is bitter yet the only way of life.
      Hope you’re doing well! =)

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    1. Thank you very much, Pepperanne! Specially for noticing Fractals! They are my favourites too, there’s so much simplicity in it’s complex structure – totally fascinating!
      I haven’t been around much and have missed your poems! I’ll get myself updated asap. =)
      Even if it’s a bit (a lot?) late wish you a lovely new year, Pepper! ^_^

      Much love
      Light

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    1. Haha, you’re too kind to think so high of me but there are so many who write a lot more creative poetry than me..and so can you! Believe in yourself and you’ll be just fine! I look forward to reading some poetry by you too! =)
      Thank you very much. I appreciate your presence on my blog. ❤

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      1. its not that im thinking high of you but you know…
        people usually arent very good at poetry… umm like me.. 🙂
        plus your the poet i know of at the moment…
        :p
        thankyou very much
        im glad to have you in my blog too

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