
If the water
stuck between
tooth valley
of my grinning comb
is the bar graph for
the rate at which
my hair is
betraying
its roots
the last valley –
an empty space
might be a bother
If the water
stuck between
tooth valley
of my grinning comb
is the bar graph for
the rate at which
my hair is
betraying
its roots
the last valley –
an empty space
might be a bother
Brilliant; love this. Hope you’re well! 😀
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Thank you very much, my friend! I’m well, hope you’re too!. 😀
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Very well, thank you! ❤
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Intense. Like a haiku about a fly that mustn’t end with “Splat”/
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Hope this one didn’t, C. Arigatou XD
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