The crushing wail of a desolate
wind cycle stuck on an uninhabited island
the rushing tide struggling
to swallow the lone piece of land
The island lies in peace
Unperturbed and still
No man is an island
But perhaps every island is a man
Forever rooted in its cradle
waiting for an unknown existence
To come and build houses out of uneven stones
until life separates the blood from the bones
I wrote this poem last year in the month of July. And, somehow looking at my past writings, I have this soul crushing feeling of alienation. It isn’t about which is better or worse..moreover it isn’t in any way a comparative analysis. It’s the connection that feels lacking, which makes me as happy as distressed. It also parallels with the sense of losing something you hold dear. When it is out of reach, you want it back at any cost. And, if it’s never found, you either get a new one or learn to lose interest, more like self deception.
Have you ever felt the same? I’d love to know your perspective! =)
Very haunting last line. I’ll be back for more!
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Haha, I take that as a compliment. I’d love to hear more from you. Thank you for stopping by! 🙂
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Seems like marriage
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Hahaha that’s one clever conclusion, Yoshiko! Thank you for the comment, made my day! 😀
Hope you’re doing well!
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Welcome 😀 That is my intepretation. I am trying to do well.
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i dont know why but this gives me the shivers…
it reminds me of a isolated place or maybe an island….
its a really beautiful writing though….
🙂
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Woah, I’m glad it’s in a positive outlook that you get the chills. ^_^
Thank you for the comment! It’s been a long time. Hope you’re doing well! 🙂
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i am…
thankyou..
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youll know why i disappeared when you read my latest post…
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Oh, I’ll check it out asap!
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Brilliantly Penned! “No man is an island But perhaps every island is a man” I just love this phrase. It is truer than true that when we long for something ardently and if its not harnessed, we either fill the void with close substitution or we tend to engage disinterest. Life is all about breaking, adjusting, re-adjusting and letting go.
Hope you are doing great. Stay Shining!
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Thank you very much, R! ❤
You said it perfectly! "we either fill the void with close substitution or we tend to engage disinterest." – words to live by! I'll keep it close to my eyes and read it when I feel distressed.
I'm doing alright! Hope you're too! 🙂
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My pleasure, always. I have just said what you have brilliantly put. I am doing great, dear. Shine Bright!
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You too! And stay warm! 🙂
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This rings of T.S. Eliot… we come back to our island though we never really left, when blood and bone are separated and know the place for the first time. And all the feelings of distress and happiness are just the muddy waters of life that we much navigate to get back.
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Wow, thank you very much! ‘distress and happiness are just the muddy waters of life that we much navigate to get back.’ – very true indeed.
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Yes! Yes!!
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YES Indeed! 🙂 ❤ ❤
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